61. Kerlins.net > Writing Critiques Bobbi s Place Education writing Center writing critiques. IMPORTANT ELEMENTS TO CONSIDER WHEN writing A critique. © Bobbi A. Kerlin, PhD. HEADING. http://kerlins.net/bobbi/education/writing/critiques.html

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64. Student Bylines Magazine - Where Students Get Published And Paid! Student Bylines Magazine showcases the artistic and literary talents of students from all over. Submit your writing for a free critique, get published online or in print, and get paid. http://www.studentbylines.com

What's New... May 2004 Thank you for visiting. Whether you are interested in writing, creating art, or volunteering: we have something for everyone. Please browse the site and find your place with Student Bylines. The online edition of Student Bylines has been updated with new content. The Student Bylines Forum is now up and running. We are critiquing several submissions of writing and will have them finished soon. If you would be interested in having your work critiqued check out the free critique page. If you are interested in helping to critique work email seth@studentbylines.com and take a look at the volunteer page. News Archives: Check out all the old news here That's it for now. Make sure and check back again soon. Direct any questions or comments to seth@studentbylines.com Question of the day: What will the cover of the next issue look like? We'll give a sneak peak of the next issue's cover, and a handful of selected poems, short stories and artwork soon. Check back soon and take a look. Entries are still being accepted for Volume II.

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66. HOMEPAGE > JEWISHWRITING.COM Nonprofit organization offering email courses for Jewish writers including journalism, memoir, fiction, grant writing, publishing and poetry. Courses are interactive and fee based. Editing and critique service also offered. http://www.jewishwriting.com

Home Courses Faculty Enrollment About Us ... Contact Us JewishWriting.Com e-mail and correspondence courses Advisory Board Latest News Books Are you interested in a place to develop your writing without compromising your beliefs? A place to challenge your mind without neglecting your soul? The opportunity is here with The Jewish Writing Institute. The chance to receive individualized instruction from some of the most talented and experienced writers in the religious world. The chance to grow as a writer, as a person, as a Jew. Our curriculum is professional, our method of teaching is personal and our classrooms are in the privacy of your own homes at whatever time suits you best. At the Jewish Writing Institute you will improve your writing skills in a way consistent with the values of our Torah. You will not have to expose yourself to immodest language and morals. You will be able to grow as a writer, while protecting yourself from detrimental influences. Here's how it works: Look over our courses and see what interests you. Do you want to sample a one session workshop or sign up for a six session writing experience? Interested in creating a poem or writing a memoir?

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68. WFTV.com - IcFlorida writing and discussion group in the community of Williamsburg. All are welcome to read and critique others' writing. http://www.icflorida.com/community/groups/creative/

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71. Hardcore Critique Guidelines Hardcore critique Guidelines. we are commenting for the purposes of publishability, and our goal is to help authors to become publishable and published writers. http://www.sfwa.org/writing/hc_critique.htm

Hardcore Critique Guidelines by Amy Sterling Casil When we criticise work, we are commenting for the purposes of publishability, and our goal is to help authors to become publishable and published writers. For prose pieces, the following issues are critically important: Plot - does the action make sense? Is what is written moving the story forward? Sometimes, the pieces are too short or are fragments, so a complete plot analysis isn't possible. Most pieces can be judged within the first few sentences for effective plot beginnings, however. That's what editors do. Does the story start at the right place (the beginning?) Most stories by beginning writers start far too early - way before the key action takes place. Some, however, may start too far forward. These writers have taken the advice of "start with the action at full steam" too literally. Is the pacing appropriate to the story? Too fast? Too slow? Just right? Is the plot a real plot (a character, in context, with a problem)? Are things happening which seem to have no discernable reason or purpose? The ending: is the payoff adequate to the buildup? Does the ending make sense? Is it satisfying? Does it arise from character and situation or is it "deus ex machina," where the Cavalry suddenly comes riding in over the hill to save the hero and heroine? Most importantly: were the seeds of the ending sown in the beginning?

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74. Writing Groups And Critiques - Tara K. Harper, Writer's Workshop writing is 95 percent rewritingand critique (selfinflicted or otherwise) is the foundation of rewriting You can t fix a problem that you cannot discern. http://www.tarakharper.com/k_crit.htm

Main [ Home Novels Bio Photo Gallery ... Links FAQ [ Writing Queries Agents Publishers ... Books Tara K. Harper: Writing Groups and Critiques Do I recommend that new writers join writing groups? Writing-group members as editors Taking critique "This book fills a much-needed gap. " - Moses Hadas (1900-1966) in a review Do I Recommend that New Writers Join Writing Groups? D epends. There are lots of reasons people want to be in a writing group. Some people want a friendly, supportive atmosphere which will help them build the self-confidence to continue writing or to try getting published. A writing group can help with this. Some people need for someone else to set their deadlines, so that they can complete projects they would otherwise put off or abandon. Writing groups can be structured to do this. Some people want a test group of readers on which to try out their stories. A writing group certainly provides this. However, some people want professional-level critique and editing to help them prepare a manuscript for publishing. I have not personally seen or read about any writing groups which offer this service to their members. In general, when people ask me about joining a writing group, my response is to say, join a university or college. Take more writing classes, take literature courses, take journalism. Put in a couple of years studying psychology and economics, philosophy, religion, and history. Read other authors for style and traits you would like to emulate and for those habits or aspects you would like to avoid. Studying writing methods and tools and then attempting to recreate or use them in your own stories has always seemed much more useful to me than trying to write for a particular group of people.

75. Pacific Northwest Writers Association A nonprofit organization dedicated to fostering the creative and professional talents of writers. Site details writers conferences, contests, critique groups, forums and articles on writing. http://pnwa.org/

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76. Poetry Forum - Poetry and general writing forum offering user interaction and critique. http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/

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79. The Write Stuff - Central Illinois Writers Come Together Central Illinois writers group based in Bloomington/Normal offering support and critique. Site details annual writing contest. http://www.freewebs.com/thewritestuff/

Home Contests The Write Stuff Central Illinois Writers Come Together What is The Write Stuff? The Write Stuff is a group of writers in the Bloomington-Normal area meeting every month to support, critique, and challenge each other with new ideas and inspirations. Club President/Treasurer is Teresa L. Trotter. Teresa is a single, stay at home mother of two adopted children. She writes psychothriller novels and horror short stories. She also freelances nonfiction articles. Teresa's writing goal is to be able to support her family with her work. Club Vice President/Librarian is Betsy Davis. Betsy is a journalist whose leadership has helped make The Write Stuff what it is today. Club Secretary is Anna Bohn. Our youngest member at 16, Anna loves writing fantasy fiction. The Write Stuff is now meeting at Borders Bookstore on Veteran's Parkway in Normal, Illinois. We meet the second Wednesday of each month from 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m. Please join us! ANNOUNCING THE WRITE STUFF 2004 SHORT STORY CONTEST "OCTOBER" is the theme of this year's short story contest. Write a story, no longer than 1500 words, that takes place in the month of October.

80. WebRing: Hub For writers' groups and guilds, literary and writers' organizations, online discussion and critique groups and writing resource sites. http://k.webring.com/hub?ring=thewrittenremain

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